Mystery of a Soul
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A poem written after a serendipitous encounter with an amazing amazing soul!
ago. who is she -Mystery of a Soul
I was surprised
as a sparkling star
resplendent with the
fierce energy of Rudra
snow balled
into my outstretched palm.
it rolled onto grass
and grew into a beauty
eyes closed
meditatively I presumed
laughter arose
gray moon chuckled
derisively
at a
decidedly inane
assumption
to right
the sun and to left
the moon
rose simultaneously
in her mudra palms
casting an enchanting
spell on this
ignorant observer
fragrance from 3000 years
the perfumed vapors
rose
as a question
and ignited in a blue
flame; she slowly
adsorbed its’ dance
effulgent skin
now with a form and now
without there
emerged a quantum
conundrum
what exactly could I know
about her? before,
now or the here after?
the wind she blew
turned the moon blue
amazed as she
spoke, “come!”
the moon, a finger tip
away, a doubt
arose if she was real!
appeared a red diamond!
no matter how hard
i tried
it remained a stone
gentle breeze
with a familiar fragrance
blew and it whispered
bring me back here
tomorrow.
©Krishna Mohan 2015 March 27
ago. who is she -Mystery of a Soul
I was surprised
as a sparkling star
resplendent with the
fierce energy of Rudra
snow balled
into my outstretched palm.
it rolled onto grass
and grew into a beauty
eyes closed
meditatively I presumed
laughter arose
gray moon chuckled
derisively
at a
decidedly inane
assumption
to right
the sun and to left
the moon
rose simultaneously
in her mudra palms
casting an enchanting
spell on this
ignorant observer
fragrance from 3000 years
the perfumed vapors
rose
as a question
and ignited in a blue
flame; she slowly
adsorbed its’ dance
effulgent skin
now with a form and now
without there
emerged a quantum
conundrum
what exactly could I know
about her? before,
now or the here after?
the wind she blew
turned the moon blue
amazed as she
spoke, “come!”
the moon, a finger tip
away, a doubt
arose if she was real!
appeared a red diamond!
no matter how hard
i tried
it remained a stone
gentle breeze
with a familiar fragrance
blew and it whispered
bring me back here
tomorrow.
©Krishna Mohan 2015 March 27
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- +Daipayan Nair Wow! that is very high praise my friend! I was certainly inspired for sure! She is an enchanting angel I met unexpectedly! I will leave it at that!
Mar 29, 2015 - Mar 29, 2015
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- +krishna mohan unclassifiable poem made full revelation of mysticism and spirituality!
Its reading leaves us completely breathless!
Being a description of something "unknown" (between the natural and the supernatural ?), you managed a rhythm with increasing intensity, one imagery such that we are able to see your air amazed, awed, incredulous and gullible, submissive and humble ... due to the presence of someone who was excercising a fascination, a mesmerizing, a clairvoyant and a supernatural power ( or unnatural). We can capture all the consistency of description that establishes us be neither creative invention or dream (no gaps) ..
and ignited in a blue
flame; she slowly
adsorbed its’ dance
effulgent skin
now with a form and now
without
with a familiar fragrance
blew and it whispered
bring me back here
tomorrow
Blessed you are ... having witnessed a visit of such a special Soul... praise, humility, compassion are words full of meaning that come to my mind... Mar 29, 2015 - +krishna mohan Hmmm... mystical, musical, marvelous, brother! Hey! I too wanna know who that fair lady is! Such is her description, so definitely, she carries a charm and a room of mysteries! Touched the soul!!! :)
Mar 29, 2015 - +Helena Dias i'm without words at the magnificence of your insight! My interaction with this amazing soul left me without the luxury of my words for She is such a spirit! I will humbly say Thank You Helena! Words fail when there is something or someone beyond description. I have now experienced this twice within the span of 24 hours.
Mar 29, 2015 - +Anya Nad Thank you Anya - the fair lady is an amazing and a blessed spirit! Sometimes life has a way of communicating through synchronicity and it is as if I was in the presence of someone who has known me for eons!
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- +krishna mohan hope my comment has brought some consistency with what you felt, saw ... it comes not only from your words, but what I "read" beyond them!
Perhaps nothing new on this event you experienced again! in your poem you wrote She said "come"!
The sublime and the unexpected leaves us out of our comfort zone!
All my blessings and ... She blesses you! Mar 29, 2015 - +krishna mohan Wow! She must be a blessing upon you! Never mind, that "wanna know part" was a kidding one!! :) Stay blessed!!! ;)
Mar 29, 2015 - Speechless. Yes indeed no doubt even a poet may not be able to find words for such a beautiful unique soul. So here i say you are not just a Poet but an esteemed great talented Poet who managed to capture such a rare beauty through your pen. Beautifully awesome write.
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- +Usaid Ali that is such a wonderful thing you say Usaid - such a beautiful blessing you bestow upon me!
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